1. Lucas slams open the wooden door and staggers into the hut, panting like a dog with rain water dripping down from his hair…
  2. A bolt of lightning descends from the menacing dark sky and hit the ground, missing Penny by only a few inches…
  3. Ian opens his eyes only to find himself in a ruin, with corpses lying around everywhere…
  4. Terence pulls out the arrow that has pierced through his arm, blood gushes out of the open wound as he screams with pain and despair…
  5. A trail of blood is right in front, Wayne continues cautiously with  his wobbly legs, and with every step he takes, he tries to catch up his breath…
  6. “Front scout reporting, SIR! He is all alone.” Upon hearing, the commander signals to his troops and they advances step by step towards a run-down house…
  7. “No, please don’t kill me, I beg of…” Hanako smiles at her samurai sword that is now covered by the final target of her mission…
  8. As he stretches his right leg over the railings, Leo can now see the busy traffic under him from where he is sitting. The more he leans forward, the more he can see under him, and he smiles at the world which he is ’stepping’ on…
  9. Strong wind blows at the cliff where Amy is. She just stands there, staring blankly at the horizon with her hair flowing violently with the moving air, and speaks to herself “It’s settled. Finally, every thing’s  settled…”
  10. Kyle is all curled up and lying on the floor, coughing and shivering periodically. “Mu… Must… save her, before…it’s you! It’s…” Throws out a mouth of blood, his eyes slowly rolls up, closes his eyes and loses conscious…
  11. Jack points out to the sky and shouts out, “Look!” Jill looks at the direction Jack is pointing to, opens her eyes as wide as her mouth, with her rate of breathing increasing by the seconds…
  12. “Here lies the God of Nature, Green Dragon” Mark reads out the words carved on a stone tablet by the entrance of an ancient shrine…

2 Comments

  1. Your openers are generally okay. Some of them, like Number 4 and Number 5 are too general and too similar. I like Number 8 – very intriguing and interesting. I’d read a book that started like that.

  2. great, no. 8 is my favourite too. =)
    it was something sucky at 1st so i last minute changed into this thing that happen to flash across my mind.


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